ANNABEL REPORTING
Let me introduce myself. I am the fabulous, spectacular, irreplaceable, Evil Doctor Moo!
Written by Amelia.P.
Her smart royal blue hat and her heavy orange boots makes her look like a real detective.
Written by Lydia.
Meet Billy, Billy is a very kind and caring type of person with a very bubbly attitude that lights up the room.
Written by Molly.
Red bumpy rough skin, horrid green horns, bulging lime eyes and a sinister smirk.
Written by Joshua.
Enchanting eyes which you can never miss as they are so memorising.
Written by Gemma.
2015 Room 9 Christ the King School
WELCOME to ROOM 9! We are an enthusiastic bunch of Year 5 and 6 children at Christ the King School. Our School Motto is, "Stepping up for Success" and that is exactly what we are aiming for. We are being inspired to be EXTRAORDINARY in our thinking and learning.
OUR MISSION:
This Blog is designed to showcase our writing talents in Room 9. Each week two children will be selected to be writing detectives. Their mission will be to select pieces of writing that are inspiring and creative. They will publish these pieces on the Blog so that everyone can marvel at the exciting writing talent emerging in Room 9.
YOUR INVITATION:
Your job is to comment positively on the individual pieces that you read and tell us how they captivated your attention. All authors love the feedback, so please let us know what you think as it will continue to inspire and motivate us to write more!
HAPPY READING!
Monday 15 June 2015
Thursday 21 May 2015
Writing Detective: Isaac
It sounds like someone having a mammoth tantrum in their bedroom and throwing cushions everywhere. By Zarah
Screams of agonising pain fill the air. By Gemma
My wacky cat was springing around and around in circles trying to catch his tall terrific tail. By Hannah
A sea of motionless bodies lies before my eyes, death and destruction is everywhere. By William
Crash!Bang!Boom!All I could hear was the sound of pain and agony filling the air. By Daniel
Super scorching sizzling hot, roasting peoples unburnt back. By Lance
Life in the cold,muddy trenches was far from cosy. By Gregor
The bang, the boom, the war of doom. By Emilie
I bounced around the room like I had grasshoppers beneath my feet, like there were springs in my slippers, like I was a balloon bobbing up. By Amelia P
Concentrate, guns firing everywhere around me. By George
My Commander had obviously had too much beer because he was rocking his gun like a baby! By Joshua
Zipping and zooming bullets racing towards you as fast as a cheetah about to pursue its prey. By Max C
Finally I see cover but I don't see many people. By Rheubyn
Ridiculously crazy about chocolate I could eat it all day. By Christian
It sounds like someone having a mammoth tantrum in their bedroom and throwing cushions everywhere. By Zarah
Screams of agonising pain fill the air. By Gemma
My wacky cat was springing around and around in circles trying to catch his tall terrific tail. By Hannah
A sea of motionless bodies lies before my eyes, death and destruction is everywhere. By William
Crash!Bang!Boom!All I could hear was the sound of pain and agony filling the air. By Daniel
Super scorching sizzling hot, roasting peoples unburnt back. By Lance
Life in the cold,muddy trenches was far from cosy. By Gregor
The bang, the boom, the war of doom. By Emilie
I bounced around the room like I had grasshoppers beneath my feet, like there were springs in my slippers, like I was a balloon bobbing up. By Amelia P
Concentrate, guns firing everywhere around me. By George
My Commander had obviously had too much beer because he was rocking his gun like a baby! By Joshua
Zipping and zooming bullets racing towards you as fast as a cheetah about to pursue its prey. By Max C
Finally I see cover but I don't see many people. By Rheubyn
Ridiculously crazy about chocolate I could eat it all day. By Christian
Tuesday 19 May 2015
Writing Detective: Lydia
Joy is the shade of the beautiful bright sun shining on the golden sand.
by Alex
It tastes like a freshly made pavlova, ready to be demolished by a peckish human being.
by Amelia S
It is the mouthwatering taste of melted chocolate oozing down your throat.
by Gemma
Anger is the colour of red blazing hot chilli sauce.
by Diego
It tastes like a piece of milk chocolate sliding down your throat and melting into many marvellous moments.
by Emilie
Sadness smells like a revolting dead rat swarmed by flies.
by Lydia
Joy is the shade of the beautiful bright sun shining on the golden sand.
by Alex
It tastes like a freshly made pavlova, ready to be demolished by a peckish human being.
by Amelia S
It is the mouthwatering taste of melted chocolate oozing down your throat.
by Gemma
Anger is the colour of red blazing hot chilli sauce.
by Diego
It tastes like a piece of milk chocolate sliding down your throat and melting into many marvellous moments.
by Emilie
Sadness smells like a revolting dead rat swarmed by flies.
by Lydia
Thursday 14 May 2015
Writing Detective Nyko
Shooting through the choppy white capped waves like a blazing arrow.
by Isaac
I feel like I'm free falling, like a flightless bird.
by William
Slashes of lightning cut through the clouds.
by Lydia
Charging soldiers run into position for the first of many invasions.
by Max c
The wastelands would sprout stretches of scarlet from the blood red colour of the poppy flower.
by Libby
Weaving through the waves as quick as a dolphin.
by Molly
Were greeted by a remarkable sight of scarlet, blood red beautiful poppies.
by Abby
Red flowers were blooming upon their feet.
by Hannah
Shooting through the choppy white capped waves like a blazing arrow.
by Isaac
I feel like I'm free falling, like a flightless bird.
by William
Slashes of lightning cut through the clouds.
by Lydia
Charging soldiers run into position for the first of many invasions.
by Max c
The wastelands would sprout stretches of scarlet from the blood red colour of the poppy flower.
by Libby
Weaving through the waves as quick as a dolphin.
by Molly
Were greeted by a remarkable sight of scarlet, blood red beautiful poppies.
by Abby
Red flowers were blooming upon their feet.
by Hannah
Wednesday 13 May 2015
Writing Detective : Miss Amelia P
Anger is the stench of baking being burnt, the fire alarms ringing with irritation.
Written by Macy
Joyfulness is the fantastic fragrance of freshly picked lavender.
Written by Emilie
A sea of motionless bodies lie before my eyes, death and destruction is everywhere, blood oozes out of the recently executed bodies.
Written by William
Happiness tastes like sensational strawberries, the juice trickles down my throat.
Written by Hannah
Fun looks like Donald Duck trying to surf.
Written by Joshua
Sadness is the colour of a dim, gloomy grey on an early winters morning.
Written by Lydia
James runs off and joins a game of cricket while I'm still standing there like an insignificant, wobbling statue in the cold.
Written by Libby
Laughter is like a beaming shade of sapphire blue.
Written by Zarah
Awesome colours of leaves, goodbye green, see you later.
Written by Isaac
Love is the colour of a gorgeous ruby red, glistening in the sunlight.
Written by Abby
Anger is the stench of baking being burnt, the fire alarms ringing with irritation.
Written by Macy
Joyfulness is the fantastic fragrance of freshly picked lavender.
Written by Emilie
A sea of motionless bodies lie before my eyes, death and destruction is everywhere, blood oozes out of the recently executed bodies.
Written by William
Happiness tastes like sensational strawberries, the juice trickles down my throat.
Written by Hannah
Fun looks like Donald Duck trying to surf.
Written by Joshua
Sadness is the colour of a dim, gloomy grey on an early winters morning.
Written by Lydia
James runs off and joins a game of cricket while I'm still standing there like an insignificant, wobbling statue in the cold.
Written by Libby
Laughter is like a beaming shade of sapphire blue.
Written by Zarah
Awesome colours of leaves, goodbye green, see you later.
Written by Isaac
Love is the colour of a gorgeous ruby red, glistening in the sunlight.
Written by Abby
Tuesday 12 May 2015
Writing Detective: Nyko
She moved like a headless chicken with ants in her pants.
by Zarah
The dogs howling sounded like a tortured soul.
by Matthew
She moved like a headless chicken with ants in her pants.
by Zarah
The dogs howling sounded like a tortured soul.
by Matthew
Monday 11 May 2015
WRITING DETECTIVE: MISS AMELIA P
Sprinting for cover as the winter breeze blows furiously. Written by Elina
Feeling overwhelmed,
Looking for peace and forgiveness,
The unbearable sight of blood and enemies,
The war goes raging on. Written by Macy
Joy is seeing playful puppies pounce in loose food found under the table. Written by Max C
Happiness feels like a big warm hug after a bad day. Written by Amelia S
Her skin was as wrinkled as hen's feet but she still looked stunning on the catwalk! Written by Libby
Her voice was like an angel's but her face, not so much Written by Amelia S
Sprinting for cover as the winter breeze blows furiously. Written by Elina
Feeling overwhelmed,
Looking for peace and forgiveness,
The unbearable sight of blood and enemies,
The war goes raging on. Written by Macy
Joy is seeing playful puppies pounce in loose food found under the table. Written by Max C
Happiness feels like a big warm hug after a bad day. Written by Amelia S
Her skin was as wrinkled as hen's feet but she still looked stunning on the catwalk! Written by Libby
Her voice was like an angel's but her face, not so much Written by Amelia S
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